Script changes

After the first script change (See sketchbook) I have realized through animating that the story is too long, though it is only 2 pages. This has required me to once more redraft and create a new script, for the changes please see the sketchbook. I have decided to make the script shorter after a decision through discussion, during the discussion it was decided that it would be in my best interest to take out and alter areas within the script and storyboard, in order to keep the animation short - thus keeping the animation a higher quality than it would be if I were to keep the longer script.